I liked the unexpected ending. The rest of the story is so pro-nudist preachy that the end (where they all reform) becomes wonderfully absurd. Make sure you reuse elements and characters that you introduce at least once: you name Lucy but she appears only appears in one line halfway through. Either take her out completely or bring her back in the end.
I can't log-in in this PC! 2008-02-12 . chapter 1
The phrase "Good God, Woman! Would you put some clothes on?" being repeated by almost everyone was humorous, but the stroy itself is serious. Anyway, I enjoyed this story.
Rebecca 2008-02-12 . chapter 1
[couldn't be bothered to log in... ^_^]
Indeed. This rather upset me. Your writing is good, but the theme is... just depressing.