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| Mademoiselle Memoria 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseGood flow and has (I think) the perfect kind of feeling to it to get your point across. |
| DiaRose 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is really pretty as always! It seems a little impersonal, which in my mind is the only problem your writing ever has, but I think it's very nice. Love, ~Dia |