chilling. Great work! I'm so glad I read this collection. It was well worth the time.

okay this is definitely my favorite so far. I may go back and read them all and change my mind but in this moment this one has affected me the most. The idea of heartbeats melting away like snow was immensely powerful.

The simplicity of this one was very touching. It made me all warm and happy. and relieved that he pain was ending. I'm not sure if you did this on purpose but so far it seems as if all the haikus are telling a story.

oh wow this one was very interesting. Almost morbid in a heartbreaking and beautiful way. if that makes any sense. The idea of lies woven is so strong and the desire to break free of the web but to only be strangled was heartbreaking.

The desire and yearning in these three haikus was captivating.

The imagery in this was fantastic. I particularly liked the line "as the moon watches"

Nicely written! I like your haiku's, be sure to post more!

wow this is good

I liked this one a lot, it expressed emotions very well. The last line seems like the most powerful one to me, it sums up so much in so few words. Rewview marathon weekend (link in profile)!

-Peace out.

I liked this one, it was beautiful. Just one question, though, I dont really get how the last two lines are a haiku.

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The first one had very good imagery, I could almost feel a sea breeze. I liked the concept of the last one, it seems like a wish.

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I like the first two haikus, they flowed well. Th last one seems just a little bit forced. Good work. Review Marathon weekend (link in profile)!

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the second collection is my favorite...i especially liked the last haiku. it feels very delicate to me, and it works so well. great job :)

"I never think of you
except when you call her name
then I wish for you."

I can't explain why this is my favourite. It's so ironic, in a quiet, fateful sort of way.

there's great imagery here, very vivid and descriptive. great tanka.