 underneaththesmile 2008-03-22 . chapter 1Wow. I'm really at a loss for words. It's REALLY beautiful! the description made me imagine sitting on the edge of a pier poking my feet into the water, at peace, but still feeling shattered and lost. At the begining it made me feel alone and dark and not seeing the things we were born to, but in the end looking ahead at things around me. I'm probably TOTALLY off, but I'm just trying to point out that this is great, and I could see it happening under closed eye lids. Like I can see it in a movie, a girl standing by the shore, wind blowing in her face, while she just searches through the mist for something unexpected. Sorry if I'm still off or something, I'm describing what I see. I'm puttin this in my faves so I can come back to it on those days I need a little more inspiration and boost to my day. |