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| Dot Cubed 2008-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so so depressing. I feel so bad for both Allie and her now ex-boyfriend. I think you really captured their emotions and U found myself hoping that things would get better in the end, but that was obviously a foolish wish. |
| x.betweenthelines 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abusei hate his mother... this was good, but depressing =[ |