Reviews for make it out alive

Reviews For: make it out alive

all you need is oxygen. 2008-10-04 ch 1,	abusei like the first seven lines. everything after sounded a bit like sentences cut up. but maybe that's just me; different people see it differently.
.cupids.battlefield. 2008-09-24 ch 1,	abuseI loved the way this was set out. With fragmented sentences and powerful phrases. I loved the way everything was grouped together - meshed up into one giant heart-felt confession - yet one line was left apart from the others. "Why can't i get over you?" This line definately struck me the hardest and left the largest impression. Great work, once again. ~CB
IlfirinEstel 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuse'why can't i get over you?' amen, sister.
purple x pen 2008-02-15 ch 1,	abuseim happy to tell you that you arent alone in this, i can relate strongly to what you have written about. great work!
fairytale failure 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abuseWell, I must say you sure know someone very wise...'between your heart and a hard place' is a great way of using an old saying to liken someone's heart to a rock. Okay, enough of the ego inflation =) Actually, I like how you actually mention rocks in the line above. It gives me the picture of a lonely shoreline. I think it would be nice if you punctuated it into stanzas; at the moment, it gets somewhat hard to read about halfway through. Love the ideas, hate that they had to be inspired, and I think its so true how 'sometimes lies from pretty lips sound sweeter than the truth.'
carousel chorus 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abuseOh I love this. You seem to be so sure and set in how you are going to get over them in your mind, but your heart just dosen't seem to be following the plan. Brilliant, and Beautiful! x.CC
randompoetry 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abuse"sometimes lies from pretty lips sound sweeter than the truth." amazing line right there, from the whole amazing poem. i'm sorry things are like this for you sweetie =[

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