Interesting... I'm kinda smirking right now about all the gore. I'm not that into supernatural werewolf / vampire things usually, but this was an interesting piece with some physical attraction going on and obvious pull of sadism.

Interesting idea with half transformation. And who is the woman who killed the narrator?

This is Stanley from Myyearbook and I liked this little oneshot of yours. While it doesn't make me want to punch you, it did raise a few questions for me. While I love the idea of a werewolf government I'm curious as to how exactly that works. They're werewolves, but they can't harm human's? What do they eat then? And you made a point of making it a rarity for werewolves to be able to go into a partially transformed state, yet this "random" character was able to do it in a split second. Who is she and why is she able to do it so much faster? And why does she go out of her way to kill Kevin and Delilah? Now, those questions aside, I found it very enjoy able and it's nice to be able to read something for once that doesn't make me cringe every time I see a grammar mistake. I look forward to reading more.

Mwahah! I still love it...

And it still kinda, almost makes me sad.

But they were still some pretty twisted people...

wow, I loved this. Amazing work, really. Great short story, and it could even be a great story sometime. Keep up the great work!

Faith