I love some of the imagery and word choice, which evoke a feeling of wistfulness, dreaminess. Nice work.

Very interesting. Nicely written. Good job!

i love it. it has a nice rhythm to it.

I like the general idea of this song... and if I could figure out the right rhythm, it would be seriously catchy!!

Keep up the good work!

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really great song!!

Very nice! I wish I could say that to quite a few people, in fact. Too bad they won't really ever understand quite how foolish they are.