Honestly, you know as well as I that I am not the brightest person...
It was well written, but I was also confused by it...Maybe you can explain it to me sometime.

Still, nice story.

_Vincent, SN

i liked this...it's rather sad though. =D but that's kindof your style, huh? lol. and, as i have always said, i love your style of writing because i'm a very visual person, and i can always see what you write, like it's playing on a silver screen in my mind.
good job with this, mob.

always, Irony

Huh, sad. It was an interesting glimpse, could be an interesting story. It feels like something that most people would think cheap, unoriginal and plastic. But once you feel the edges and rub away the first impressions it grows on you. I liked it, good job.