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| XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-07-04 ch 4,  | abuseOk, so i was going to read all and review all but I decided not to do that lol Obciously right? Anywhoo, I like this. It moves a little fast though. You might do well to slow it down just a tad. And I kind of want to know where Shawn's head is in all of this. |
| IndianPrincess 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseHey great update its been a little while and happy to see and read this update it was good poor Nadia anyway look forward to see what happens next so please update again real soon ok? Thanks, IP |
| elysiangravity 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseinteresting :) a little more exposition would be nice though...but otherwise, good! i would be very grateful if you could come on over and review the story i just posted as well...thanks :) |
| IndianPrincess 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseThanks for the update looking forward to the next to see what will happen if you really do decide to tell Shawn that she likes him. Have a great day and please update soon. IP |
| IndianPrincess 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abuseWell I'm still reading and as long as you keep it updated I will continue to read them and send my comments thanks this story is getting good looking forward to some descriptions of the others from her new school please can't wait to see what happens next. IP |
| IndianPrincess 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseHey that was a cute story I hope you will update it because I want to see what happens with her next thanks for sharing. IP |