 Cy 2009-11-22 . chapter 67 Ya! Serph's profile! Approved!
Awesome chap. Austin shall be a virgin forever... lol. Sophie rejected him, too.
Next chapter nao plz. |
 Ray 2009-11-20 . chapter 67 nice chapter ^^ |
 RBA 2009-11-20 . chapter 67 Nice chapter as always.
Hehe.. Wonder if people have caught up... Oh... I said too much... Lalalalalalalalalalalalalala *keep on singing*
*Stop singing seeing Cy's comment of chapter 66*
Oh, Cy, Cy, Cy... Just now? Hehehehehehe
I like being cryptic... Hehehe
Good job, Mr. T.
Hmm, you seems to throw them faster than normally. But they're still as good written as before. And they're still long too, even if you feel like they aren't. |
 Frayling0 2009-11-19 . chapter 67I loved this :D Some nice stuff here, focusing on the characters, especially Ash. I enjoyed it, so all in all good work, but I really wanna see the plot move on soon. There are so many secrets in the past being hinted at... I want to know them all haha. Nice work. ~ Luke |
 YoKozo 2009-11-19 . chapter 67Hmm, it was an all right chapter, but it leave me wanting to know these plans... plans that are always concocted by Seth. It's like there's some new one every week and yet it's all just a step-by-step process to his devious acts, whatever that is...
I think the character interaction was the strong point in this chapter. Ace's trivial hatred for Ash, Felicia's desire to get Ash to come after her... Ash is getting popular quick. Good change of things, but I'm just about ready to go back to main story now.
Wait, so how did Ace get the xenotrium collar? |
 slitxeyes 2009-11-16 . chapter 66Oh no.. Felicia got caught? *sigh* I'm guessing Ash will go and save her (and Austin...) and perhaps impress her or something... :D Well, keep up the great work! I can't wait until the next one!
~slitxeyes |
 Cy 2009-11-14 . chapter 66 For some reason I can't help but think Felicia has something to do with her own kidnapping...
And Justine is awesome as always. Ulric clones! |
 reizuki 2009-11-13 . chapter 66awesome! i really liked the story so far...
felicia gets a bit irritating though.i like leon and roy..
u did an amazing job, and i can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
 RBA 2009-11-12 . chapter 66 Hehe... Is it that time already?
End of this part of the saga?
Oh, and did you finish commenting on all the characters already? 'Cuz there's no ID file at the end of this chapter...
Anyway, chappy. |
 Frayling0 2009-11-12 . chapter 66What can I say...? Awesome chapter :D Gumshoe's random appearance caught me off guard, but it was a great chapter, setting up more threads to continue the intricate plot :D |
 Ray to the K 2009-11-12 . chapter 66 hey man this is getting alot better ^^ keep up the good work |
 Lil Donkey 2009-11-12 . chapter 66OMB. SO SOPHIE DOES SHOW UP! WEARING THE RED COSTUME!
>“I… I was just in the neighborhood! And I accidentally packed >this dumb costume into my backpack! That’s all there is to it.”
>“Where’s the letter?”
DYINGG.
>Sophie flinched as she was still in recoil from the previous >attack and was in no position to defend herself. Ulric raised >the axe, preparing to cleave her in two!
:O No!
>He swung forward with his right arm but the axe didn’t do what >he wanted it to.
:O Is it who I think it is?
>“What…?” a dazed Sophie opened her eyes, wondering what was >going on. Vy’s voice called out to her from elsewhere in the >room, snapping her out of it.
YAY!
Felicia got herself captured by Ace? '_' Whuat. I want the next chappie now. *_* |
 YoKozo 2009-11-11 . chapter 66That ending was so stupid, I couldn't help but laugh at the seriousness. It's like eating potato chips while killing criminals all over again.
Anyway, Justi-Girl x3 vs. Ulric was pretty cool. It got better once Sophie came in, but man is that guy a damn mobile fortress. I wonder just how long he'll last. I didn't think Gumshoe would show up in this chapter, but all the same, awesome. Haha, Dick. |
 YoKozo 2009-11-07 . chapter 65Pretty cool chapter. I love how the beginning starts. It couldn't get any better with Sophie around, but that's partly why I'm disappointed that she didn't play much of a role in this chapter. On the other hand, Vy and Justine time isn't so bad.
The revelation about was actually informative on Eclipse's part. That certainly could explain the possible reason Eclipse has so many Anomalies. I should've known Seth couldn't really have threatened all of his minions' families, which means most of the members have nothing to lose... except for the fact that they're selling themselves like furniture.
BTW, great profile, but you forgot to mention the part about Allen making a sketch of her naked and selling it to Quinton. |
 slitxeyes 2009-11-07 . chapter 65It'd be nice if Justine could beat Ulric... :D I hope to hear more about Leena... and Felicia... along with Sophie more... lol keep up the great work!
~slitxeyes |