Haha Piper is totally a best friend (:

Lisa should die. d:P

Update soon. Remember the plot!! lol

Naww poor chicky... She should learn to cry :D
Haha.

Good chapter, even though you've lost the plot ;P

x

Piper is so cool! what i would give to say those things to my version (or versions) of Lisa. the problem is most of us can't think of a smart comment at the moment, but rather later when it doesn't matter anymore.

that Lisa character is such a jerk. i know SO many people like her.

Haha, Jesus is dead d:P *sorry, Jesus!*

yeah, cuz I'm that religious, right? ^

O! Good song! I love that song...and the band, of course d:P

Of course it's because of the head cheerleader who married some rich guy...cuz when does the head cheerleader ever end up marrying some nerd in real life? dxD Omg I have to tell you about this time when I was still working at Gymboree, and we were selling this cheerleading outfit...

Well...I'll tell you later d:P

Haha, weren't you nice to Lisa?

HAHAHA! Take THAT, Lisa! Of COURSE Ellie's big and awesome now! lol

Omg...D:

P.S. Do I sense a "P.S. I Love You" type story arising? d:P lol jk Hurry up and write more!

Naw!
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Poor girlie!
That's gonna suck for her...
Naw :[

Good chapter lol...

x

omg this story was so good! if you ever become a real author you'll sell really well and id definitely buy your books! this story flowed so easily and it was hilarious at some parts too. i guess the lesson to be learned is to tell someone you love them before its too late, huh?

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

Good thus far. I especially liked the thing about fictionpress thirteen year olds who can't spell... They're like deranged Oompa Loompa's that have a rudimentary grasp on reading, but spelling escapes them...and yet no real perspective or intelligence...


~NDF~

"“You said you’re exhausted, right? So, I’m assuming that you two…” Piper stopped, her meaning starting to make sense to me."
Haha, that sounds more like you talking to me dxD

"She motioned to the envelope and said, “Are you going to that?”"
I suggest "Are you going?" or "Are you going to it" rather than "Are you going to that" because it may confuse the reader (or maybe it's just me ._.'). When I read it I thought it was a typo and was going to tell you "Don't you mean 'Are you going to do that?' despite the fact that it doesn't make ANY sense at all??" dxD

Haha, I can SO see you having a friend who'd burn her hs reunion invite (don't ask me why, cuz I honestly have no idea dxD)

She's going to a HIGH SCHOOL to meet MEN?? dxD! Lmao! Okay, I know that these are fully grown men who are no longer in hs, but you have to admit, if you had to go back to your hs with all the ppl you went to hs with, even just for one night, you're gonna expect at least SOME of the ppl to get back into their old hs habits (jocks slapping each others' asses, nerds going over how they miss their old science club get-togethers at lunch, cheerleaders looking glamorous and talking about old cheer routines and what the formerly hottest guy on campus looks like now...) lol

Hehe. I just barely read the "I'm desperate!" comment. dxD

Wow. That hot, huh?
(Psst! Psst! You don't need the comma there)

Lol yes she DOES put Hitler to shame d:P

Very scary ._.'

teehee! love it!

Who DOESN'T love Buffy? d:P But I must say...I think Spike looks better d;D lol Well, okay, he's more of a twig than Angel is, but...d:X I'll stop ranting now dxD

"My face nearly exploded from the embarrassment. I like how I’m still a bumbling idiot in my dreams."
dxD Loved that part.

"...to said friend in years?”"
I *and POTC* are rubbing off on you, Mel d:P

"Angel wasn’t paying attention though and I huffed angrily.

“Angel?”

“Good bye,” he said.

“Excuse me?” I confusedly asked.

DING DING DING!

“Holy!” I fell out of my bed and groaned, my hand reaching for the alarm clock. I groaned again and muttered, “That is not a nice way to wake up.”"
Sadly, I have woken up from those kinda moments in dreams, and it is EVERY bit as hysterical as it seems on paper...er...type d:P

Ah..if only we had those robot alarm clocks *envious look on face*

"‘i didnt lyk this part at all. it wuznt funneh.’"
dxD! You should put that one reviewer that was all bitchy or whatever on here too dxD

Wow. That SUCKS for that imaginary girl dxD

...Landon is strange. d:P

"Landon was a documentary photographer. Which really makes me wonder what kind of pictures he was going to take."
I think those two should be one sentence; comma rather than a period.

"Yeah, that’s what I’ll do. But… first, maybe I should stop talking to myself."
Yes. Maybe you should d:P

Ah, fresh, funny, juicy and addictive! You never seem to be able to bore me!

Very nice!=D

I loved it!

~Lemonz xx

O! And so the plot thickens! d:P