Its... almost certainly a poem. We can work from there.

It's short, so I'll believe that its one stanza, but you may want to clean up and get rid of the extra line breaks.

The reference, or theme rather, of pagan invocations is... not at uncommon as it once was, though in some poetic circles it's becoming rather cliche (or at least an element of Pop Culture). It's descriptive but largely devoid of deep imagery, instead its very telly, not without feeling, but not focusing on making the reader feel an emotion.

Its not a bad attempt, by any means, but it could use a whole lot of work in trying to convey an emotion of love without the line "I love you".

This was very good, dark but good. Keep it Up!