*shrieks* Its been almost a year!

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Ooh, how I wish I was back inside a tourbus again...
This is so sweet. I love the guys. I think Elijah has to be my favourite. I'd love to listen to his irish drunken slurs anytime. =)
This gives me such good vibes (even though it's kinda dramatic) I just have to fav it and hope that you'll update soon!

Poor Avery...I'd go mad if I had a whole bunch of Hormonal Boys (note the caps) talking about my urrmm...whatever. And it's so great that they got a music video!

Nice! I like the way you introduce each character.

ok, so maybe it was the redhead. She's crepy... erm, lesse... I loved the quote 'Mr. Darcy had it going on'! That's my favorite so far.. please update soon!
~Sophia

Ok, so it might be the redhead, but I think it was... EVAN?!
keep posting please!!
~Sophia

omg, I lurv this story! keep posting!
~Sophia

But he said her name not the girls he was with. Surely that means he returned, dagnammit.
JM

aw! Ryan and Avery are so cute! (as friends)!! I love this story, keep writing it! it's nice and long! yay! Nice descriptions! keep it up!
~Sophia

Oh naughty red haired girl.
JM

Oh wow! A total twist in events, and..again, quite original(: You're good(: I don't think it's that redhead girl though..

Decidedly up to par, although I was just going to say it was "smashing."

Did the evil red haired groupie mess up the bus or was it Evan? My bet would be on the tramp...but I've been wrong before...


NDF

this is rather good thuis far

dude, I love it. ^^

I really like this story so far. I loved drunken Elijah...can't wait for more!