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| E.J. Teine 2008-06-21 ch 2,  | abusePoor Avery...I'd go mad if I had a whole bunch of Hormonal Boys (note the caps) talking about my urrmm...whatever. And it's so great that they got a music video! |
| E.J. Teine 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseNice! I like the way you introduce each character. |
| The Datura Rose 2008-03-11 ch 4, | abuseok, so maybe it was the redhead. She's crepy... erm, lesse... I loved the quote 'Mr. Darcy had it going on'! That's my favorite so far.. please update soon! ~Sophia |
| The Datura Rose 2008-03-11 ch 3, | abuseOk, so it might be the redhead, but I think it was... EVAN?! keep posting please!! ~Sophia |
| The Datura Rose 2008-03-11 ch 2, | abuseomg, I lurv this story! keep posting! ~Sophia |
| Jevanminx 2008-03-10 ch 4, | abuseBut he said her name not the girls he was with. Surely that means he returned, dagnammit. JM |
| The Datura Rose 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseaw! Ryan and Avery are so cute! (as friends)!! I love this story, keep writing it! it's nice and long! yay! Nice descriptions! keep it up! ~Sophia |
| Jevanminx 2008-02-25 ch 3, | abuseOh naughty red haired girl. JM |
| dimethylmercury 2008-02-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh wow! A total twist in events, and..again, quite original(: You're good(: I don't think it's that redhead girl though.. |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseDecidedly up to par, although I was just going to say it was "smashing." Did the evil red haired groupie mess up the bus or was it Evan? My bet would be on the tramp...but I've been wrong before... NDF |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abusethis is rather good thuis far |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abusedude, I love it. ^^ |
| allgoodthings 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story so far. I loved drunken Elijah...can't wait for more! |
| dimethylmercury 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abuseOh... Something's up with Evan(: I thought this chapter was kind of... filler-y? Though it does sort of outline what to expect of the band in the coming chapters.. Hmm... Some 'you're's' were used incorrectly though.. But, though filler-y, I thought the chapter flowed quite well(: |
| Lauren Perkins 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is a cute and fun story, very lighthearted. It leaves you feeling much the way Avery might, and I like all the insights into her character. Keep up the good work. |