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| Eirien 2008-02-18 ch 1,   | As has been said in the previous reviews, the imagery is wonderful. I love the melancholy tone, the way you use images of nature to express a love that persists even through rains, whether these rains symbolize the passage of time (the other person having perhaps left a long time ago) or the problems weathered together. A beautiful poem expressing feelings I can definitely relate to. |
| Basara 2008-02-17 ch 1, | how it's been all set in perfect memory... like how a sound of music is tinged repeatedly in mind... nice... |
| right2reality 2008-02-17 ch 1, | I really liked this. The imagery you used fitted so perfectly, and the connotation of ‘broken’ added an underlying sense of despondency which I thought was particularly effective. Keep up the good work! -right2reality |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-16 ch 1, | Oh, I love this! Amazing imagery! I can relate... Great job! Keep it up! --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| sleeping Pisces 2008-02-15 ch 1, | The imagery in this haiku is truly amazing. The whole poem flows beautifully, too. I love how there is a subtle melancholy behind the words, too. Peace, Daze |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-02-13 ch 1, | Wow, the imagery in this poem was absolutly amazing! It makes you stop and really think about what you wrote! Beautiful! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |