Reviews for Empty Eye Sockets

fairytale failure 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, I love how you tie in the title to the poem. I like the angry tone in this, and how at the end the reader understands the meaning of 'empty eye sockets' - those were carved out first.
Basara 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abusea martyr on faith... nice...
Ygg 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseWow the last line is haunting! Nice work!
painted.music 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abusekonban wa Sorry - too lazy to log in. :-/ Lovely hiaku as usual. :) I love the dark, bitter tone this piece hints to (though actually doesn't say outright). "Did you carve out her heart, too?" Sarcasm... yet still really wanting to know the answer. Ha det -Shan-
Faith Adeline 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abusegah, I adore it. Great job. Faith