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The Postscript 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Great poem and beautiful message. I especially loved the imagery of the vapor and the grass. The line "What we are is but a speck" reminds me of Emerson in Nauture, saying "I am part in parcel of God." Beautiful write, as always. God bless, k.
VictorInChrist 2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Wow. Amazingly said. We have only little time here on earth compared to eternity. Many times people are preparing for the future, but we arent gaurnteed that, it should be a question of what can we accomplish for the Lord here and now. Wonderful poem, and a good reminder. You have a wonderful talent, hope God will use you greatly. God bless.
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