| Reviews for Pik and the World |
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Small Wings Flying 6/20/12 . chapter 1This fic was sadly looking at me, begging for an R&R. So I'm here to oblige. :) So Pik gave her creations too much power? Yikes. I really love the Book II for some reason. Except you do seem to have a lot of contradictions worked into this. Some may be on purpose, but I feel that the concept of reflecting is rather distracting. Especially when the recipe says "I NEED NOT Reflect. I AM GOD." - Isn't it reflecting there? And the moral of the story is...don't get in over your head? [Som recipes poked at one another too.] - that should be "some". |