|Reviews for Pik and the World|
| Small Wings Flying 6/20/12 . chapter 1
This fic was sadly looking at me, begging for an R&R. So I'm here to oblige. :)
So Pik gave her creations too much power? Yikes. I really love the Book II for some reason. Except you do seem to have a lot of contradictions worked into this. Some may be on purpose, but I feel that the concept of reflecting is rather distracting. Especially when the recipe says "I NEED NOT Reflect. I AM GOD." - Isn't it reflecting there?
And the moral of the story is...don't get in over your head?
[Som recipes poked at one another too.] - that should be "some".