| Reviews for Failure |
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andylikesthesmellofspring 8/14/08 . chapter 1once again. g |
ten pts above average 2/13/08 . chapter 1I like the message... but you started off rhyming (which was shakey) and than you stopped... that kindve throws everything off and takes away from the poem... :-/ But I am just one reader... |
ZombieMcQueen 2/13/08 . chapter 1well, I like this. alot. in fact, I think I love this. I can relate to this, particularly with some recent personal problems of mine, and it really shows the true pain and sought-after-strength that one needs for these kinds of things. bless you, and I hope you come to feel better. |