|Reviews for Failure|
| andylikesthesmellofspring 8/14/08 . chapter 1
once again. g
| ten pts above average 2/13/08 . chapter 1
I like the message... but you started off rhyming (which was shakey) and than you stopped... that kindve throws everything off and takes away from the poem... :-/ But I am just one reader...
| ZombieMcQueen 2/13/08 . chapter 1
well, I like this. alot. in fact, I think I love this. I can relate to this, particularly with some recent personal problems of mine, and it really shows the true pain and sought-after-strength that one needs for these kinds of things.
bless you, and I hope you come to feel better.