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| Pretty Prim Kitten 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseI hate you for making me like this story. I wanted to be mad at Katya (not Tan or Tanya as you called her at one point) but I couldn't. It's so stupid the things that people do when on the rebound. Hence, take some time off to get to know you-3 months -3 yrs. It ended beautifully. It so reminds me of God's grace to us. We miss up so badly but his love compels him to give us greater than we deserve. Kisa |
| SpottedStar 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if anyone has ever told you this but your characters interactions and emotions are so real, it's as if your watching a movie and your heart begins to ache for the situation. Very good, in fact EXCELLENT! |
| Nyleve Nalloc 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseHey girl. Finally have time to read! I really liked the divisions in this story but most importantly the point. I loved it. You make characters that feel very real and are completely human; I love it. |
| mariahxpapaya 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseaw, that was truly very cute! i thought it kind of got a little cheesy at the end but i loved it![: greeaat job! |