Reviews for Walking the Path Alone

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dawn9800 2008-05-08 ch 13,	abuseWHAT!? The suspense may kill me dang it!!
Leenaelle 2008-05-06 ch 13,	abuseWow! That is some serious drama you've got going on there! My goodness, way to keep us on the edge! Sorry I wasn't quick to review this chapter, I have got so much going on...it's ridiculous, and sad. Anways, I love, and hate the cliff you've left us with. Can't wait to find out about this Stefan look alike...am I remembering something about a twin? And I really hope that Bianca doesn't loose the baby...because, she didn't, right? Because in the epilogue of the first one...she has two kids with her...right? Ok, don't make us wait to long!
IheartStewart20 2008-05-05 ch 13,	abuseOh. No. You. Didn't. No! You cliffhanger **. J/k. I can't believe you would end it there! She and the baby HAVE to be ok. Otherwise... oh it is on. I was half hoping it was Stefan too but then reality set in. Poor Bianca. Please let everything be alright. Update son!
diabolical.angel 2008-05-04 ch 13, anon.	abusei think i read this in physics.. v dramatic!! poor guy, just came to cheer her up and ends up nearly killing her and the baby. nice one, lol!
diabolical.angel 2008-05-04 ch 12, anon.	abusewow, you keep forgetting that bianca's so young! was it even legal for her to marry stefan?? your portrayal of the cook is really funny :) fish heads for dinner.. yummy love x
Aomera 2008-05-04 ch 13,	abusetypical it would happen to her - the last thing she needs!! well written though, bianca's hallucinations are devastating and you make it all so believable. a few things i noticed: 2 typos: 'using at as a time to arrange her thoughts.' meant to be 'using it as a time to arrange her thoughts.' i assume. also i presume 'She had learned the dangerous' should be 'She had learned the dangers', just to point them out for you. and one other thing: this sentence 'Scrubbed her hand across her eyes, she scolded herself' doesnt seem to make much sense i dont thing - do you think it's better as 'Scrubbing her hand across her eyes, she scolded herself' ? up to you. i better get back to some biology revision - much rather read more of this but nope, i have no choice! (i.e. write more bientot!) love, aomera x
NF 2008-05-01 ch 12, anon.	abusehey, sorie i havent been reviewing in a while (my aba took away my laptop hehe) well, i just read the chappies you've written so far and let me just tell tt i wasnt at all dissapointed,(cheeky smile n wiggles eyebrows) i luv the progression in the story..so will there b something between matthew and Ava?? cant wait for ur next update!
Clarelouise 2008-05-01 ch 12,	abuseoo such a kl chapter! rlee rele gd, love the reference to fish heads ha ha i love the way u describe bianca as wanting to surround herself with people who knew stefan as a way of keeping him alive inside her, so heartaching and sweet and lovely! also the way that matthew and ava are 'subtley' showing an interest in eachother, but its rele kl cause if i didnt know i would be unsure whether they liked eachother or not, cause they hated eachother so much before. keeps up the suspense! and yay u fitted in the nursery scene :D it didnt feel bitty, i think the way u finished one bit with matthew hurrying off, then after a bit had him talking, a gd link so it flowed. ahh this is a long review, i hope it lives up to the ones u give me! rele lovely chpatet x
Sydney 2008-04-30 ch 12, anon.	abuseLove this series! I just read all of your stuff in the past few days, and I'm very impressed with the depth and bittersweet tone that you've managed to craft. Please update this again! I'm praying for a happy ending for everyone, after all the heartache. Oh, and Ava and Matthew are quite endearing as a couple :)
IheartStewart20 2008-04-30 ch 12,	abuseI'm still so surprised at how young Bianca is. 17?! Wow. And what happened between Ava and Matthew? Did they "support" each other while they were both vulnerable the night before? Mmhm. It's great that Bianca is getting out and doing normal things. And she's smiling more. Fantastic! Looking forward to more!
Aomera 2008-04-29 ch 12,	abuseoh i so saw that coming with matthew and ava, he :D love the whole baby thing and them being happy :) brought a smile to my lips! go painting in dungarees! um one tincy thing: 'Unable to ‘do nothing’ as she put it she usually ended out helping in the kitchens' wouldnt you say 'she usually ended up'? loving it wie immer. (as always) nice to spend time with you it art today, love your aomera SHINE SHINE xx
dawn9800 2008-04-28 ch 12,	abuseGood chapter I like to see little snippets of the every day of the characters :)
dawn9800 2008-04-24 ch 11,	abuseAww bless her heart! :(
Aomera 2008-04-21 ch 11,	abusedunno how many times ive said this, but youve written a lot of chapters! this is one of my fav. i just love it, not beacuse thy're all unhappy but because of how well you portray that and i felt like i was there. and the last bit was just perfect, i felt happy too :D love you, want more!! x
IheartStewart20 2008-04-20 ch 11,	abuseThat was such a heart-wrenching chapter. Poor Bianca. But the ending was a little encouraging. More soon please.

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