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| Selarose 2008-03-18 ch 1,   | Wow, I totally though she was waiting for her lover to come back from sea or something lol. But, I guess, she did find a lover in the Doc? |
| Ramenluver 2008-03-11 ch 1, | "Fearful. Formidable. Fantastic." lol, Totally appreciated the alliteration. XD I thought it was a little too...deep for just talking about humpback wales? Like all the emotion seemed out of place? I dunno, it just left me feeling kinda odd...maybe down tone it a little bit and focus more on details. Paint a brighter picture for the reader. -Ramen |
| clumsybella15 2008-03-03 ch 1, | I thought Jen was waiting for her boyfriend to come back or something. I love the twist! |
| AnonymousWriter993 2008-02-15 ch 1, | :D Brilliant! I love the almost intimate, unspoken understanding between the two - fantastic theme choice! ~AnonymousWriter993 |