This is reqally interesting. I'm a really big of "fairytales" that don't go the way tradtion exppects them to. FUN! Btw, I'm also working on some Twisted Tales of my own so you might want to check that out? Of course, mine are slightly different in that I'm a bloodthirsty bit.ch who really likes cannibalism & stuff... Ha!
Good job anyway!
Keep writing!

You go Cecilia! The prince sounds like a real snore. I can relate to Dani when she says that her teacher tells her to focus. I hope they never find Cecilia and she can live happily ever after on her own. ~*~

A totally different twist of a cinderella story. I like it especially the fairy godmother!

The first chapter is a little hard to follow, but otherwise, this is good too.

Update soon

You missed a few letter here and there. Poor Cecilia, at least she only has one more night to go. Yellow smoke now, I guess that means our fairy friend is getting better. I feel sort of sorry for our Maximilliam friend, but only a little.

I liked it. Poor prince, you think he would have more power. I liked the Fairygodmother. She was so cool :)

I really like this. And I'm choosy...


...meaning I like mostly anything with words...
But I haven't read a lot of fairy tells, so...

Keep it up!