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| Crysta Mayville 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseAw... how sweet! I redid Lighthouse, by the way, would you tell me what you think? Thanks! ~Crissy |
| Lily Llynn 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI like the integration of the songs and Tyler. This was pretty fun to read (especially the TV scene), but I did find some stuff I didn't like. (or didn't agree with, or whatever.) 1. 10:30 - 3:00 = 2.5 hours? I'm not sure if that's what you meant, but that's what I interpreted. :P 2. The romance felt a little forced. If the romance is between Andy and Tyler. 3. In continuation to #2, it felt even more forced because the beginning was spent entirely on Sue, and Andrew wasn't even introduced until much later. However, this was fun to read, and I'm glad Sarah Allie (formerly Mizz-Insane) added this to our c2. (: |
| his-skinnyDOLL 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, the cuteness! That's lovely. xD I love how there were songs all the way through it. Rock on! |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute. It was kind of crazy in the sense that I knew at least three of those asian bands...yeah. Good job :) -Aria |
| Sarah Allie 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, my God! This is definitely the best fluff I've read in a loong time. Ty's not exactly your average protagonist, you know? There's just something about her that's so different and so refreshing; props for that! And by the way, thanks for reviewing my story; I appreciate it ;) Oh, and is there anywhere I can get the lyrics in English? Judging by the title, it's an awesome song... Sarah :) x PS - Awesome penname. |
| snowdance-lyghtning 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseAW! I love those stories that make you feel warm and fuzzy inside. Sadly, we all have crappy Valentine's Days that don't end happily (but that's why they invented cake, people!). Anyway, the story could've used a little more description in the beginning and at the end. But otherwise, it was great. Oh, and thanks for the French translations! |
| BlueGorilla 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. I loved all the quick emotion and irony of it. And you made somewhat of a typical-high-school event interesting for a guy to read about. Lol. Sweetness. |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseaww! Adorabubbleness! Love it! -x-x-x- |
| Sophia 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseCompletely awesome! And I like your title :) |
| Sara Frisch 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseYour story is really sweet and depressing at the same time. |