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| Laughing In the Night 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseIt has a nice feel to the words. It's like the way the most delicate glass feels under your fingertips. Fragile, delicate. Really deep. I wonder about where you got talent. You should publish a full series of poems up here. |
| electric feel 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusethese are beautiful words |
| Waiting on the World 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseWow... I'm not precisely sure how you did it, but in eight lines you wrote the most dense (I'm fairly sure that's incorrect grammar, but alas, it is late) thing I have read in a month or two. I just loved the obscure choice of words, and the pretty cliche theme turned a bit awry. :) Beautiful. |
| DiaRose 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, this is perfect! This is absolutely flawless, this is like something from some famous, eternally adored lovestory. This is magnificent. Favorited a thousand times over! Love, ~Dia |