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| admit it.you luv me 2008-02-16 ch 2,  | abusewow...I read ur one shot it was really good...Maybe Bryna would get a BF and try to make James Jealous..lmfao...it mite work |
| alsynn 2008-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should. Definitely. Write another chapter. The story's really good but you left a lot of things hanging. There was no conclusion, not in James and Bryna's friendship or even in James and Lyndsay's relationship. I don't think James would just let his best friend be insulted or hurt by that ** Lyndsay. Anyway, the ending was practically screaming for a continuation...and I, would love to read another chapter or 2 and I believe your other readers would, too. You have a talent for writing. I could actually feel what Bryna was feeling in the end (meaning that I wanted to scream too because it hurt). Keep it up! |
| hi 2008-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSad, but good. |
| reveriexx 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseLook at me, I'm a **! LMFAO! |