never really thought of this veiw on brokenness, but i see the truth and logic in what you say and i love the last line. nice work.

you have officially written the most stuff on this site(as far as what i've seen) and if they're all good as this, you got some mad skills!

woww. this is amazing. it is completely true. D

I agree. Will is everything.

my favorite lines:

healed wings become broken…just as easily

as they fell apart the first time.

people think this is just the way life is.

the poem makes me think about the meaning of the life.

Wow. You write alot, and i love them all.

I like this a lot... the idea of pain is wonderful and I love how you bolded the word stop.. awesome job

lovely

In a mystical sort of way I suppose

Keep writing, it's fine the way it is

I love this poem. It's so true. Wonderful job.

Faith