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| Moonlight Other 2008-03-10 ch 5,  | abusei like how you opened ur story up with the journal entries. Very nice. I hope you continue, it's a good story. |
| CatDog-runs-fast 2008-02-25 ch 5, | abuseah, thats better, longer chapters. keep writing :) |
| CatDog-runs-fast 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abusethis is very short. if the journal(??) entries are short then i suggest writting more of them for each chapter. |
| The MS Excursion 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseTis very short, lovie. |
| CatDog-runs-fast 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusewill each chaoter be this short? it seems like an interesting start but i have no idea as to what is happening/will happen. intentional... maybe? |