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Evasiveshadow 2008-11-22 ch 19,	I really like your story and all the angst and stuff, but I'm kind of confused about your ending. Explain, please?
Xiufen 2008-11-13 ch 19,	Oh. haha. this is the end? omg. I'm really glad it wasn't gory though. Ah! I really like the way you made the characters so alive. terrifying. (: your words are so enthralling. you don't resort to cheap devices to scare people. you are, genuinely, um, authentically, freaky? haha sorry I lack vocabulary but this was just a really scary story (horrorscape I) and I was afraid to be in the dark. Well, I like the lustful love thing, it makes perfect sense to me. I really love the part where he enchanted her into taking her virginity too! amazing. valerian is such a beautiful name. I don't understand why jade died though. am I stupid? did I read too fast? oh shit. I feel really dumb. I'm confused about Mary too, haha. your writing is pretty mind blowing. really, really dreamy. in a very graphical nightmare sort of way. erie! (: thanks for sharing this story with us, it was a pretty... surreal trip. you are such a great writer. awed ohoh yeah I love horrorscape! the plot is perfect.
Jazzytea 2008-10-30 ch 19,	Interesting. Going through your Horrorscape...I figured hell, this is probably going to be good. And it was. However, on some suggestions (though I'm not entirely sure whether or not you intended this to be so...) perhaps a little more background as to why the hell GM wants her anyways? Or, I suppose, more background on GM himself. He is such an enigma. Or maybe he's the personification of every girl's dark fantasy and because of the lack of information, each person can view him in a different way? Or maybe I'm analyzing this too much. LOL. Regardless, I like GM. I don't know why. Probably the dark fantasy deal, but how the heck did he get away with those murders? And why does Val LOVE him? She knows nothing about him. Is it all lust? From what I read, it seems to be. Feelings shmealings, if he was ugly, she probably would never love him. I don't know. I'm not hating on this story, I'm just hating on the lustful love thing. Because, in my opinion, that's not real love. It's a selfish love, and that's why so many of us want it. We're selfish, and we want someone to love us and to make us feel good. That's my analysis. Lol, I never intended majority of the above to be in this review, but hey, great story! LOL I just wished there were more details. Like what happened to Mary. Or maybe a more solidified ending for the couple. What happened after that? Are they in a relationship? Does all the drama-hunkydory stop? Does Val ever have a normal life? And what about the end of uh...Blindfold Chess, was it? Was there supposed to be a purpose/ending/significance? Maybe I haven't been reading intently enough and skipped over some parts, I don't know, but hey you wanted feedback, and those are my questions :D Did I mention I liked the story? A lot? It started out as a horror-zomg suspense kinda movie deal. But it transpired to uh, villain-hero thing. This is too long. Anyways, I await for your rewrites, and perhaps a response from you, but I won't expect too much. :D Thanks for writing this story! It was a great distraction from homework. --Jaz
Cryssy 2008-10-19 ch 19,	I like the ending very much. I'd prefer you not change it. Even add some more sappy things like proclamation of undying love or something like this. Anyway, great work. You know I almost fell in love with GM nevertheless he is a little psycho. Keep writing, you're great!!
october lies 2008-10-07 ch 19,	i fucking love your writing. you add a bit of horror and mystery and suspense i can not find anywhere else and i absolutely love it. i love the way you've created valerian and "gm", despite how we don't know his birthname. the twist of how she never calls him his real name, and hardly by anything at all, really drew me into this. this is fucking amazing. but where's mary?
vermillion-dream 2008-10-06 ch 11,	I had no idea you'd made a sequel to the first, though I don't recall the first ever ending unless you're currently re doing the chapters, I've obviously missed alot, but the sequel is just as delicious as the first, I hope you do update soon, for both of the stories. Unless of course the first is complete, and you just decided to leave the ending up to us only feeding us these little excerpts from the sequel. I'll be watching to see if you do update. ~Vermillion
Bellaria 2008-10-05 ch 19,	nice ending, very good. Bellaria
wennifer 2008-08-20 ch 19,	omgosh..its finished!!? i like the ending..slightly sappy, but in a good way..not too sappy or out of character.. :) but im kinda confused about hte mary thing..so did GM2 never kidnap/kill mary (cuz there was no one in the trunk)? still, all in all, this was an awesome fic, and i cant wait to read more of your stuff!＾＾
not so random 2008-08-05 ch 19,	Aw. I am sorta sad that it is over, but I am excited to read the new ending and the prequel. I hate the second GM he was just horrible, but I do feel a little bad about his sister. ~Casey
Acts.of.Whimsy 2008-08-05 ch 19,	sniffles THAT WAS AWESOME!! I LOVE GM SO MUCH NOW!! :,] I love it just the way it is, hun. I'm so glad I found your story. Ah, man. Now I wish I had a Favorite Favorites List. Cause you'd own it. Haha. Now I need to read your other stories. Woohoo!! Until next time. ~Acts.of.Whimsy
Terras1fan 2008-08-04 ch 19,	Whoa, the ending, already?! I agree that it was slightly sappy, perhaps, too much for such a story. However, I did like GM's last line about the antidote to poison. I wish you would have elaborate GM's history more, considering how we got to see those pictures and everything in that mansion... well, I thought you would have tied it together and explain GM more thoroughly. Still, I'm glad that you didn't make him lame in the end. He was still creepy and unrestrained GM, which is sexy in the whole "I'm evil" way. Really, it doesn't make sense, lol. My suggestion give a bit more GM background and make Vance less noticeable, because I figured it was him a chapter or two ago (uncertain, but fairly certain). Oh, and I love the Charlie twist - I didn't expect her brother to be involved. :) Oh, and Mary should have had a bit bigger of a role in the ending or something. I sorta liked Mary. XD You did a great job. The end. -- Terra
poison 2008-08-04 ch 19,	Wow,that was somewhat unexpected. Interesting ending though, i liked it. :D Is there going to be a third?
A Droplet of Rain 2008-08-04 ch 19,	wow. Vance. Should have known. I wonder if GM killed him. Thanks for the update. It was kind of cute in a chilling kind of way when GM said Val was the remedy to his poison. Keep writing and updating!
LovelyxXxDreams 2008-08-04 ch 19,	So GM was never playing a game with her? Or is it just that we all assumed he was going to be playing another game, and we were terribly mistaken? I never would've expected Vance to be the 2nd GM. I really thought it was the guy from that party. I'm totally confused, but I don't mind, because it was awesome! I never saw it coming. I'm excited for the rewrite! You're extremely talented, and you keep me pulled in. There was never a moment that i was bored with this story, or ever remotely close to being bored! Keep up the good work! By the way, I'd really buy the books if you got them published! ^_-
sunny-raindrop 2008-08-04 ch 19,	It's over? gapes Way to come home from holiday... Hm. I'm happy that GM not only didn't kill Val but saved her and in a way they ended up together. I'm sorry that there aren't more chapters left, it's always such a sad feeling. Don't worry about the ending, I don't think it's sappy though I was surprised by GM's "explanation". Greatly. Maybe it's time I started rereading the first piece of the series and I'm looking forward to read the new version of this one. You have no reason to be not satisfied but it's a good thing if you aren't. Nice, huh? :) I mean, this way you are willing to improve and become even better but provide us new chapters and scenes at the same time. It's a win-win situation. Congrats!

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