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MissMei92 2008-08-18 ch 17,	abuseo.o I am speechless. LOL I never know what to say in reviews without sounding like a kiss-up. -_-" BUT I LOVE THIS! I've been looking for good stories on FP and this one goes way past the bar. :) "And then I felt something else." What does that mean? O: (I'm not innocent... but idk I can't figure out what it is heh)
brandii 2008-08-18 ch 17,	abuseWhoa. The intensity is killing me :o I wonder, do these organizations actually exist? To me, it's always been something of an urban legend, but that makes a little naive. These guys run along the lines of terrorists, right? Scary stuff.
OhSweetheart 2008-08-18 ch 17,	abuseThis story has me captivated! Please update soon I need to know what is going to happen to Christina.
SeraiRhifune 2008-08-17 ch 17,	abuseThis was so good! You are simply wonderful, dear. I'm so happy to see you're updating again more frequently! Gawd, I hate Adrian. Can't you just..you know...kill him off? I would like to see Christina and Michael get something on. With her consent, though. I feel that's a ways away...but I'm willing to wait for it;-) As always dear, I remain your loyal reader, Serai Rhifune
BluePillow75 2008-08-17 ch 17,	abuseThis is so unbearable! You are doing cliffys everytime! Update soon, or I will... ... ..do something... O.o
Aqua Revolver 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseI freakin applaude your writing in this story. I don't get fully enraptured in most stories, but you have definitely got me 100% into this one... Loving the story!
sunny 2008-08-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseMy third review. I just can't stay away from this story, lol. I've thought of making my own account. I think I'm afraid of the committment..ahah. I hope Christina, er, doesn't find her parents yet. That sounds awful but they would hinder her. Making she should hear from them, but not meet them yet, that is, if they're okay!? I'll be waiting for an update everyday♥
sunny 2008-08-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseHaha, I went back to my older comment. Ironically, here's my promised down payment to you as you've updated in less than a week making my day awesome! Another 2 reviews! And, if I review other people's stories I shall recommend this one! To you, I personally recommend this story I've been reading by an author whom I see to have a lot of potential. The stories called Free Fall. I'm not sure if the link for another fictionpress works here, but it's this: /s/2360767/1/Free_Fall It's worth reading. the author is very nice too! Keep up the excellent work! I've mentioned you as an author to her as well!
sunny 2008-08-16 ch 17, anon.	abusecandid, you make my life. ♥ [Perfect: Michael x Christina] Adrian; psychotically hot in his own sense. A love triangle, only not really, lol.
JadeDream 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseI cant wait to see what happens to Adrian haha..Update soon!
sunny-raindrop 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseThat was good for sure! And fast. And I'm amazed. It'd be boring to tell every occasion that this one is my new favourite chapter but I also means that they're wonderful, so why not? I liked it very much. And I really really hope that Micheal is going to save Christina from Adrian. Uh. And... please don't hate me and maybe I misunderstood it but "three" is "free", isn't it? ("I pulled it three with a pop.") Hope you update soon! (Like this time :)
Sarahj259 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseAH! Update!
I Quoth Nevermore 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseOh man! Adrian caught her--not good. Great chapters. I like how you write Michael. So he's not the typical bad guy who turns good at the sight of a damsel in distress. He's got character. Please update soon!
Hazelnut-Romance 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuseupdate again soon! thanks for the quick update btw.
autumnsprite 2008-08-15 ch 17, anon.	abusegreat chapter, i would rather be with michael that adrian! ahahah, not only because michael is gorgeous. he plays the not so white knight well ;D

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