I would really like to hear this as a song! It would really interesting to see how you put it all together. But overall i really ike it... it wasn't what I expected.

Very nice, short but pretty. I really would love to hear what they sound like to you! Well done, smiles for you!=)=)=)=)=)
~Danielle=)

It was really short, but I got a lot out of it. I especially loved the end. Great job.

Short and beautiful. love the line:
"filling empty space with dread"