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| Satan'z Myth 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is evidently one of the saddest stories I've ever read..and since I'm feeling rather miserable right now it made me feel worse. I found this story to have a lot of despair which was probably the point..but the part where you brought in hope - I found it to be weak. You did not mention how Josiah had died so the emotions of "How could you leave me?" were a little blank - did he kill himself (probably not) or something else? I assume it's the latter so it's okay, but it would be nicer if you could specify. Gee..I'm being too critical, while you said you hate it anyway :P You've authored some of the nicest things on this site, so I always keep my hopes up when reading a story by you (:praise praise:) |
| Emmy 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseKATY! You always make me cry... |
| rrrrr 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this story a lot, actually. It made me want to cry and kind of reminded me of when my dad died. I didn't cry when i went to the wake for him, and I didn't go to the funeral either. ._. But now I can't ever stop crying when I think about it. |
| Jikarui 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseJesus. Incredible story. It made me cry when he finally broke down. Bittersweet. Don't delete it. D: It was really good. |
| Sundown 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI usually skip/skim over most angsty pieces these days as they tend to become all the same and a tad tedious...but this one kept my interest the whole time and I read to the end. I like the integration of the childhood memory of the Grandmother's passing - the idea of comparing deaths...linking those feelings together. "Sometimes I feel them in the space right above my eyes, somewhere behind my eyebrows, but when I blink to urge them on, they separate and scatter instead" I liked this part because I could pinpoint that exact feeling so...awesome image. I liked this piece and it was well written...good work! |
| magalina 2008-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked the ending :o It wasn´t... shitastic XD Really nice, sad, I wanted happy today D: Great as always! |
| Broken Bright Eyes 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is not bad at all. It made me cry.. Made me think about a lot. I think it's a fantastic one-shot. |
| nate 2008-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseany story that makes the reader cry is awesome! |
| Back of Beyond 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseNice one-shot...well, not 'nice', but you know. xD |
| narcissistic 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseaw that was sweet and sad...it was bittersweet! |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseAw! So sad! Poor Leo! Oh my god... I cried. I really did. (Still wiping tears) :( Man...I can't even find words to discribe how good this was. Great work! |
| Single Black Rose 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseAlright, I know I don't review much, but I like this, and it certainly is not Shitastic. Some people's greatest works come from the most painful feelings. I think you should keep this up, consider it a tribute to something people lose every day. ~Rose |
| Chasmodai Blue 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseFragments. Death. Angst. Suck suits. Happy Chas. Liked. Poor Leo, so alone. Josiah, how? Done. |
| Sychaeus 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseMade me teary- i was watching this rally thing earlier and yes. Whole day is conspiring to make me cry, damn you. barrow boy- reminds me of kentucky and not having to do anything. |