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Satan'z Myth
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is evidently one of the saddest stories I've ever read..and since I'm feeling rather miserable right now it made me feel worse. I found this story to have a lot of despair which was probably the point..but the part where you brought in hope - I found it to be weak. You did not mention how Josiah had died so the emotions of "How could you leave me?" were a little blank - did he kill himself (probably not) or something else? I assume it's the latter so it's okay, but it would be nicer if you could specify.

Gee..I'm being too critical, while you said you hate it anyway :P You've authored some of the nicest things on this site, so I always keep my hopes up when reading a story by you (:praise praise:)
Emmy
2008-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseKATY! You always make me cry...
rrrrr
2008-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked this story a lot, actually. It made me want to cry and kind of reminded me of when my dad died. I didn't cry when i went to the wake for him, and I didn't go to the funeral either. ._. But now I can't ever stop crying when I think about it.
Jikarui
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseJesus.

Incredible story. It made me cry when he finally broke down. Bittersweet.

Don't delete it. D: It was really good.
Sundown
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseI usually skip/skim over most angsty pieces these days as they tend to become all the same and a tad tedious...but this one kept my interest the whole time and I read to the end. I like the integration of the childhood memory of the Grandmother's passing - the idea of comparing deaths...linking those feelings together.

"Sometimes I feel them in the space right above my eyes, somewhere behind my eyebrows, but when I blink to urge them on, they separate and scatter instead"

I liked this part because I could pinpoint that exact feeling so...awesome image. I liked this piece and it was well written...good work!
magalina
2008-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked the ending :o It wasn´t... shitastic XD Really nice, sad, I wanted happy today D: Great as always!
Broken Bright Eyes
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseThis is not bad at all.
It made me cry..
Made me think about a lot.
I think it's a fantastic one-shot.
nate
2008-02-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseany story that makes the reader cry is awesome!
Back of Beyond
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseNice one-shot...well, not 'nice', but you know. xD
narcissistic
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseaw that was sweet and sad...it was bittersweet!
red-headed psychopaths want...
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseAw! So sad! Poor Leo!
Oh my god... I cried. I really did. (Still wiping tears)
:(
Man...I can't even find words to discribe how good this was.
Great work!
Single Black Rose
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseAlright, I know I don't review much, but I like this, and it certainly is not Shitastic. Some people's greatest works come from the most painful feelings. I think you should keep this up, consider it a tribute to something people lose every day.

~Rose
Chasmodai Blue
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseFragments. Death. Angst. Suck suits. Happy Chas. Liked. Poor Leo, so alone. Josiah, how?

Done.
Sychaeus
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseMade me teary- i was watching this rally thing earlier and yes. Whole day is conspiring to make me cry, damn you.

barrow boy- reminds me of kentucky and not having to do anything.
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