Reviews for the stars are silent now

Reviews For: the stars are silent now

t-t-t-ouch. 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI dont even have words. stunning. truly.
Chidori Nadare 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI really, really like this. It's just so powerful and so damn good. "[...]swirl so pretty in the air and then melt away vanish into the asphalt,[...]": I love this part. Great job on this one. =) -C.N
starleaf 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseI really, really liked this. Some of the lines were so great, like "And I'm listening to the sky but the stars are silent now." I'd say the only thing to improve is the flow... the first stanza seems a little choppy. Also, I don't really get the pont of the ()'s. But good work! This is going on my favorites. :)
lamia morosa 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abusehmm...very good poem...i liked the way you compared your wrist to being mettalic...however, i did think it was missing some commas...or something...it just doesn't look right...but aside from that, really good poem.
shutitoff 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI like what you've tried to do with the brackets but I don't think you quite succeeded. Overall a nice piece, the conflicting language worked well and it was a good length.
Faith Adeline 2008-02-15 ch 1,	abusevery, very good poem. I throughly enjoyed it. Wonderful piece :) Faith
simpleplan13 2008-02-15 ch 1,	abuseswirl so pretty... prettily melt away vanish... I think there should be a comma or something to separate those to phrases Beautiful piece as always... I really love the beginning and how that ties into the ending... I also really love the part "pretend we believe in hope" awesome piece
Ashelin 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseI love the way it ends, because it seems so far from the central of the poem when really it just defines it so much more. Wonderful job.

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