Hello! This is going to be strange and random but anyways...I don't know if you've ever felt it but when you've sunk so low...or even given up on the one thing that gave you hope for the days ahead...and helped you pull yourself forward in hope of achieving or expiriencing that...you ask yourself or God(if you believe, that is) what's next? what are you supposed to hold onto?...well i'm going through one of those phases...and i asked for anything to stop the hollowness...and i saw this and read it...and it sort of made me see that if you let yourself die...then you will...so yeah...very insightful...and as i've said before, i love your style of writing. :) thanks.

Well. If the quality of your rewritten NaNoWriMo is on par with this, it will be a pleasure to beta.

I love this piece. The metaphor is so powerful, and the fact that you use music to carry it through makes me very happy - there's not enough music in prose. In so few words, you completely flesh out your character, and you fill your story with emotion and color (be it dark or brilliant). It was a joy to read, and tears pricked my eyes near the end.

Kudos!

Yours,
Asa

Very good, I like the air of mystery and melancholy. It made feel sort of reflective...