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| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseGreat job at expressing your emotions. I can relate. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusewell im going to laugh now, but not at you but at me, because I think I would rather like worrying about it more so than ignoring it, and as I have told you it gets me into trouble most of the time. So really your poem had the opposite effect on me. I still liked it though :P I would say go ahead and give it to her but then that might end in illegal activity so I wont. I hope this at least cheers you up a little bit :( |
| melbell 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusethis is one of those really good ones where you forget that youre not reading some important published book. i hope that made sense? good job. p.s. i COMPLETELY agree. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! It'll go in my favorites! I liked how you put the questions into the poem! That was an excellent idea! Your rhyming and setup was so great as always. I think this is one of your best! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOh dear, I have nothing to see. I've been feeling quite misplaced lately. You're the opposite of me. When I tell my friends "don't worry about it," it almost always means that I'm too ashamed/afraid to share with them. You know what I realized last night? My best friend laughed when I told her my mom was going to walk out on my family. It was heartbreaking. -stix- |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. I understand everything your saying. Kristie Marie |