Great job at expressing your emotions. I can relate. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

well im going to laugh now, but not at you but at me, because I think I would rather like worrying about it more so than ignoring it, and as I have told you it gets me into trouble most of the time. So really your poem had the opposite effect on me. I still liked it though :P
I would say go ahead and give it to her but then that might end in illegal activity so I wont.
I hope this at least cheers you up a little bit :(

this is one of those really good ones where you forget that youre not reading some important published book.
i hope that made sense?
good job.


p.s. i COMPLETELY agree.

This was great! It'll go in my favorites! I liked how you put the questions into the poem! That was an excellent idea! Your rhyming and setup was so great as always. I think this is one of your best!
The Reverse Edge Blade

Oh dear, I have nothing to see. I've been feeling quite misplaced lately. You're the opposite of me. When I tell my friends "don't worry about it," it almost always means that I'm too ashamed/afraid to share with them.

You know what I realized last night? My best friend laughed when I told her my mom was going to walk out on my family. It was heartbreaking.

-stix-

Nice poem. I understand everything your saying.

Kristie Marie