 Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Great job at expressing your emotions. I can relate. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 maximusrexmundi 2008-02-15 . chapter 1well im going to laugh now, but not at you but at me, because I think I would rather like worrying about it more so than ignoring it, and as I have told you it gets me into trouble most of the time. So really your poem had the opposite effect on me. I still liked it though :P
I would say go ahead and give it to her but then that might end in illegal activity so I wont.
I hope this at least cheers you up a little bit :( |
 melbell 2008-02-15 . chapter 1this is one of those really good ones where you forget that youre not reading some important published book.
i hope that made sense?
good job.
p.s. i COMPLETELY agree. |
 The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-02-15 . chapter 1This was great! It'll go in my favorites! I liked how you put the questions into the poem! That was an excellent idea! Your rhyming and setup was so great as always. I think this is one of your best!
The Reverse Edge Blade |
 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Oh dear, I have nothing to see. I've been feeling quite misplaced lately. You're the opposite of me. When I tell my friends "don't worry about it," it almost always means that I'm too ashamed/afraid to share with them.
You know what I realized last night? My best friend laughed when I told her my mom was going to walk out on my family. It was heartbreaking.
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 XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Nice poem. I understand everything your saying.
Kristie Marie |