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| number564182 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseha, thats great. 'a pleasant break in my sentence' very metaphorical- i love it. a read a story on fictionpress where the protagonist was ranting about semi colons( it was something about the union of semi colons- similar to a marriage, the way a comma and a period are together until they seperate, as in divorce) i guess the meaning of punctuation is much deeper than a lull in your sentence right? once again, very good. -564182 |
| antipatica 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI like this one, it's simple and sweet. I've never actually read something compared to a comma, it's cute. And yes, I am going to be utterly redundant and say that I really like this one (hearts). |
| Rory Gilroy 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abusenice one. i'd have never thought of commas! lol |