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Scarlett Wynter
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abusenice job... reminds me of a certain someone...
fairytale failure
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseI really like how you connected this poem to the title and summary...you used those techniques to make the poem hit much harder than if it stood alone.
painted.music
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

:-/ Hm, I think I actually liked the summary better than the poem. Not that the hiaku was bad, but I think that with such an excellent summary (loved it, btw), the hiaku was a bit of a letdown. Well, not a letdown... more of just an, "Oh." Because the two were so different. I liked the hiaku, but I loved the summary. How weird does that sound, right? Personally, I would love to read a poem with that summary in it. :)

Ha det
-Shan-
Ygg
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseI love the irony inside this.. Nice work!
Faith Adeline
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI really like this, it's so true.
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