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| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusenice job... reminds me of a certain someone... |
| fairytale failure 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you connected this poem to the title and summary...you used those techniques to make the poem hit much harder than if it stood alone. |
| painted.music 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abusekonban wa :-/ Hm, I think I actually liked the summary better than the poem. Not that the hiaku was bad, but I think that with such an excellent summary (loved it, btw), the hiaku was a bit of a letdown. Well, not a letdown... more of just an, "Oh." Because the two were so different. I liked the hiaku, but I loved the summary. How weird does that sound, right? Personally, I would love to read a poem with that summary in it. :) Ha det -Shan- |
| Ygg 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI love the irony inside this.. Nice work! |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, it's so true. |