hello baby, this was amazing, as you said yes there was some errors here and there but... it moved my heart. haha. baby, hopefully our fate aint gonna end likethis. haha. I love you, i love you I love you, and yesh like misha I will too follow you every where you go, so dontyou dare tell me, anything that the prince said. OKS ? haha

I'm at work on break so I can't sign in now. I just finished reading this chapter and it took me quite a while. I can see why it took you so long to post it. I loved it though. I almost didn't want to tear myself away from it but sleep called and so did other things.. After a few hours spent reading , I can tell you that I loved your actions scenes as well as the humor you've put into this piece. I also like your characters, very likable and enjoyable.

I'll definitely be awaiting your next chapter.

I love it!!

Very beautiful. I couldn't find any mistakes so far though. I guess I was just too into the story to even bother with finding them. Definitely loved this chapter and I hope to see another update from you! Great job!

I remember this story! I do believe that I had it on my favorites as well but it had dissapeared again. Now that you've re-written it again I can add it to my favorites once more.

This is an unbelievable story and I can't wait until you update again. I also like your other work, Night of the Angels, I believe and I hope that you get around to working on that one as well.

That was a very interesting chapter. Description was very good. Your characters are described in a very elegant way.



Not sure if you meant it for humor...probably not. But the mid-section for having a bathroom break was funny to me. Then again I find a lot of stuff funny. >.

That was a beautiful introduction. The imagery you used was great. To key in on my favorite aspect, the description of Seraphen throughout the prologue was very good. It was for a lack of words, deep. Also I liked the way everything followed as a dream.Very nice. It really was enjoyable. ^_^!

Thank you for the review of LIA!

ah - a very manga-type prelude - this could've easily been the first chapter as well, very vision of escaflowne-esque, but definitely interested on where this is headed.

Wow, Paul! I can't find the appropriate words to use to describe how I feel about this... It's unbelievably entrancing, and... this sounds SO stupid, rofl.. but it's.. it's like deja-vu tugging at my memory and heartstrings... but I know that can't possibly be... but... I guess it's just because it sounds so similar to me it's scary, haha.. Plus. I wasn't even expecting it to be from a girl's perspective... Anyway. lmia. Enough of this non-sense. xD!
I absolutely adore the story! I can't wait for more (no pressure though! lol. I want you to take your time on this and hopefully make it similar still to this, soorrt of, lol..) Gah! I want to know more about Seraphen, and why he's so darned saad and the Gate Maiden... and the memory... and how their destinies are going to turn out... annd ah. lol. I hope you're busy working on this...>.>;;
Have you ever had an out-of-body experience...? Is that what compelled part of the story...? That's at least sort of what it seems like to me... hmm..
mph! This story is so darned COOL! I is in love with it!