 steffxnie 2009-09-07 . chapter 1This is seriously good!
'It does not let you live
And it does not let you die
But it is the reason you want both'
Great line. Great poem.
Love how you end it! |
 XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-15 . chapter 1This is so incredibly awsome. I can so relate! Adding to C2!!
xKristie Mariex |
 purple x pen 2008-02-20 . chapter 1sweet, but a bit too sweet for my tastes lol |
 lost for words 2008-02-17 . chapter 1I like the metaphor. Favourite stanza is the second. Nice poem. |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-15 . chapter 1I love how you only call the tumor love at the end... really powerful image with the tumor and the rest of the piece is great |