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| Rachael The Philosophical 2008-05-12 ch 1, | Again, it was good, just the transitions. |
| Dumblingdore 2008-02-22 ch 1, | Enjoyed this - great little story. Is there a touch of josh in you ? |
| Nonya Soum 2008-02-15 ch 1, | Sweet story. Josh was a cute kid and his death went well with his character. All the characters were well developed for the story. It all rolled along nicely. Great story! It is very well written. Write on! |