damn, i love this. it has such pretty imagery, i will sit here and read the words over and over until my eyes blur. your writing gives me butterflies.

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it feels so sad and regretful.

i always feel too stupid to review things like this because i feel insignificant, lower than anyone whose mind could come up with something that makes my mind turn and flip around the walls of my skull.

there's something about this poem. the feeling to it.

the last stanzas grounds it all. it made me read it over. amazing, when you can do that. just amazing.

well written for the most part. i think the imagery was lovely in a sad sort of way. i just think the "**" was unnecessary; took away from the poetic beauty of the piece. but that's just my own opinion. i thought it was really good other than that. you've got talent.

ps. here with the review marathon. check the link in my profile if you are interested.

this is so beautiful. the worlds you illustrate are always so gorgeous.

"promise-me pink" - i love that.
"nothing is forever"/"she just had to prove it, didn't she." -
that is, wow. breathtaking.
in short, this is amazing.

It's so rawly lovely and tragic at the end. beautiful.