My god...I'm in love with your style of writing. I would buy ANYTHING by you.

i kind of feel too intimidated to review anything you write.
:/
hm.
i never have the right enough words.

Tangerine Skies: a boring title for such wonderful juiciness.
The Alice in Wonderland references were a bit worn and soggy, but overall I really liked reading this. Just rolling my tongue over the words. Yum!

beatles.
lewis caroll.

You are incredible.
what an imagination.

this is beyond beautiful. i really can't explain it.

"the music is yellow, and green, and pink, and you know this because it is splashing across your skin in tiny flutters of techno pulse and beat." illustrates the most stunning image.

you have talent. keep writing :)

I really like the way that you wrote this, kind of like poetry but more like fiction. I can't say that I've had any actual experience with drugs myself, but this piece reminded me a lot of a book I read a few months ago, Go Ask Alice.

I liked how you didn't use any quotation marks. Although it did confuse me sometimes, it was something really unique in the way that this was kind of like fiction and you would expect quotations, but they're not there. I also liked how you didn't capitalize anything. That was pretty cool.

Nice piece.

-stix-

i'm addicted to things like this, stories that make you feel like you're on drugs. the alice in wonderland thing is cute, i didn't realize it until i read the words "curiouser and curiouser". it's very romantic, the kind of lovelustwhateveritis that i'd like to feel.

Oh. My. God.

That's all I can say, my only reaction.
I want to feed on your writing like it's the only sustenance I'll ever need. I--

Oh. My. God.

...and it does remind me of neon signs and lights and probably loud music that you can feel through the chair. This is amazing - there's enough structure to hold it together, but loosely. I like how you weave Alice in Wonderland throughout the piece, then the repetition at the end of drinking water to wash it down; it compares the boy to the pill and it works wonderfully.

this line: "the music is yellow, and green, and pink, and you know this because it is splashing across your skin in tiny flutters of techo pulse and beat." is one of the most vivid things I have ever read, ever. 'splashing' was such a perfect word for it.

amazing piece.

e very special piece, so unlike all the others you have written. i cant determine if i like it or not...it seems it is hard to hate something you can't fully understand.

this swept me away (in a jar on a tide of over-sized tears). beautiful and oh so vivid. you are amazingly gifted. i don't dare to dream of writing like you.

& i might have seen you yesterday.

i've been away for a while now. there's a pile of unread poems in my inbox. but this, THIS, i can't go without reviewing.

i mean, i dont even have the words to tell you how amazing it is. inspiration to the max.

as i've written many times before, you are genius.