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| abc123 chewy 2008-02-22 ch 2,  | abuseit's a really good start and i can't wait for more! update soon please! |
| Magischer 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseGood start, waiting for more =D |
| iced-faerie 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseGreat story..I like the plot and the characters...your grammer is a little off, but other than that..it's all good. Can't wait until the next chapter! |
| angelofdeceit 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseits good, so far. I think it may need a little more in explaining what happened to Avery to make her not believe in fairy tales... |
| Scardycat-SCRIBBLER 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusehey this is really good, nice and original story. This is a great set up chapter...ie. the characters, the setting,etc You've got me hooked but I want to know alot more in the next chapter...keep goin hard! |
| MelGrl 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusenice start. i'm definitely looking fowrd to more, so update soon plz. ^^ |
| x3Mishna 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseWhy didn't you tell me you wrote a new story? Loser! Haha, just kidding. I really like it! You'd better update this one! |