I absolutely adore this. The whole concept of an 'anti-valentine' just makes me laugh.

There's a bunch of little mistakes in this though, like what should be 'boys' is 'oys'... Just go over it one time and look closely for missing letters, there's a couple in that sentence alone, then even more in that paragraph.

Also, in your summary:

{expansionist holiday of pink with my.] 'my' should be 'me'

Other than the small things, I loved this. Great writing

Caecilia

Aw, see, I love this story. It's so perfect. I think you should keep going on with it. I think it could make a really great story. You've got a great start. Although it'd be beneficial if you could go back and edit the third paragraph...