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| Needa S 2008-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome work, Ninja. Btw...not many people know me as Sno here. lol Sorry I didn't sign in but am still having problems doing so. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseVery well done... the rhyming is really well done and it has a great message described really well.. I like how you go back and forth from who he is to what he does for us Two things: He makes us whole and cleanse us from our sins.. cleanses I might work on the formatting... some of the lines especially the third one is really long, which kinda throws off the flow... Still a really great piece and well done PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon there's a link in my profile |
| fleur de l'est 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI love the Christian poetry works on fictionpress! Always makes me feel light in spirit and smile. Thank you for reminding us all of how special and loved we are!! |
| Phoebe Dake 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing and true! |