the piece is full of a very terrifying sort of beauty. "art is creation and we are the created" is especially good. and the last two stanzas definitely stay with you after you read them.

it seems like the first two stanzas dont quite fit. that may just be me. but i love the rest of it.

it's...art. :)

I like the idea of this. I think my favorite part is the 5th stanza, the description of what you'll do with that person. Lovely. Keep writing! :)

I love this. It's so sad and lovely. I loved (especilly) the part about even after forever.

Peace & Love

~> Hp