Okay. This is a very good story. I can see how you're intend to bring the main characters together. This has captured my attention so please do continue.

Ahh.. The plot thickens. Lolz.

When I was reading, I found it really hard to picture 16th century London. Instead, I kept seeing the streets in the early 1900s but at the mention of Shakespear and his very odd character it made my mind focus back onto the period at hand.

You have yet to mention what becomes of the Spanish woman (I'm still getting used to all their names so forgive me if I've forget hers) but I supposed it will be mention in the next chapter.

The way you have portrayed each character's entry into the story and background has been well-written and vivid especially for a first chapter.

I can't understand why no one's reviewed yet. I find this to be interesting stuff. There was some spelling errors but that's about it. I look forward to what's gonna happen next.