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| VeryShortStoryWriter 2008-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful description. Normally I don't enjoy pieces unless there's either a detailed plot or some comedic element, but this is an exception. |
| SheridanSpence 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseGeeze...how sad! Poor woman. Your writing is good - the imagery is very vivid. Nicely done. |
| Ashley Elizabeth Rodriguez 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusei got chills. i felt like I was actually on that beach. Very nice descriptive writing. You showed the contrast between "now" and "then" very well. |