Very good poem, I especially liked the second stanza.

- Pricilla Grey

I like the repetition, make the poem more deep.

It's good. Very simple, but it works well that way.

I like this part best:

"Embrace me

Assure me

You heel me

You tell me"

(Psst, "heel" should be "heal")

Hope the rest is like this! =)

Moon's Poetess

wow this is amazing! i can relate too it and my favrite part is the last staza or watever those are called! really good my friend!