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| blackoutroses 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyme seemed a little weak at some points, and perhaps detracted from the strong emotion you were conveying, having said that, there seemed to be a strong sense of honesty which works to this poem's advantage. |
| Damned Soul Of Chaos 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusewow this is really good! i can relate! ur a good writer keep writing! |